Alright OP, I'll give it a read and write my thoughts per paragraph.
P1 - Solid intro, I like how you pretty much find out a lot about the character of the bat.
P2 - Your line that goes "Cabin had a big yard surround it... - a detail which was a deciding factor' threw me off at first, and I had to re-read it. In my opinion, either you can rephrase the sentence or say "A minor detail, which was the deciding factor."
P3 - Once again maybe I'm being picky, but just by saying she 'hired' a local cleaning/lady would make it flow better. I'd also re-word the sentence about finding someone in the village to help her move her boxes. "Find someone in the village, that could help her move the rest tomorrow."
P4 - I could be wrong or but does *The last renovation, sound better?
P5 - Maybe add the line about the picture at the start of the sentence, and then follow suit.
P6 & P7 - Nothing major
P8 - Change '2" into 'Two'. I'd either say factor or store, not both.
P9 - P13 - All good, nice surprise too!
P14 & P15 - I get what you're saying but it's a little bit jumbled like it's not flowing. But I get the idea. Also, what's a core clenching man?
P16 - P17 - All good.
P18 - I think *bad boy answered* seems a bit, idk, not correct. Just a simple "he answered'
P19 - P28 Wait is she pregnant and not married? Also nice lines.
P29 - I'd change it the "grabbing her keys" to "putting the keys into the ignition" or something along those lines, to keep the flow going. Since she's likely in the car and the key would already be out.
7/10 OP, I like the first chapter and am curious to see where Tora and Woodman go from here.
*P = Paragraph, although I should have called it "Lines".
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