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    Thread created on 23:13:47 - 05/09/20 (3 years ago)
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    i'm so happy guess you could say gay
    so terrible at being human
    for this i'm blessed aren't we all lousy at being human
    i don't really care,don't want to try
    i'm so happy to be dead
    i'm so happy,I'm so happy
    can't say it enough
    i'm so terrible at being a guy
    i'm totally useless but it's okay'cause so are you
    i'm diseased it's fine
    really just stupid
    contagious infection I've got

    Sleep?Who needs it?I don't!

    Keeps biting me,just wish that I could sleep normally.

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    Posted on 16:23:40 - 10/09/20 (3 years ago)
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    In this box


    Ever shrinking,confined in my cell


    Diminishing room around me
    Chances of survival vanishing
    Incarcerated indefinitely
    Trapped in this cube
    Caught in this snare
    Crushed in this solitary confinement
    Netted within this parcel
    Prison bane of existence
    Sweet emptiness pulling me in

    Sleep?Who needs it?I don't!

    Keeps biting me,just wish that I could sleep normally.

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    Posted on 22:24:17 - 14/09/20 (3 years ago)
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    You got yourself somebody to love
    I don't have anybody,nobody loves me
    My envy of your blind love consuming



    Can I meet them
    Wanna tell 'em how lucky they are
    I ain't got nobody,call me lovelorn


    So find me somebody to love
    Not like there's anybody
    Destined to walk alone



    Stricken with a jealous fit
    Y'know my trademark
    They're lucky to be your lover


    But I guess it's fine
    Proud of you,just gonna bottle it up
    A rough journey to be open



    So congrats I guess
    Words can't amount how much you mean to me
    I love you more than I thought possible

    Sleep?Who needs it?I don't!

    Keeps biting me,just wish that I could sleep normally.

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    Posted on 09:42:45 - 03/10/20 (3 years ago)
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    Much I marveled the sleepin lullaby
    I crave the doomy, discontinued discontinuance
    Only this and a dreaminess
    The idle insomnia idling
    Suddenly, I heard some keening
    And the vocals never hibernating
    The lyric brought such sorrow
    Back into my memories slumbering
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    Posted on 11:37:46 - 15/10/20 (3 years ago)
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    Heavy on the air it falls,
    with tones as deep as myth and lore.
    Reaching forth to touch our hearts,
    as it has sought such hearts before.

    It beckons us to fates beyond.
    Such sights denied to seer and sage.
    We rise and move toward it's source
    Our lives now mark a bloody page.

    All know the words of this fair song
    the steps of this fell dance.
    Compelled by naught but our base need
    to break free from this cursed trance.

    That ancient call which summons us
    to far off places, cold and dark.
    Where trust is lost and found anew
    Where Death lends Life it's vital spark.

    We'll rise and fall to rise again
    upon these fields of truth and lies.
    Our bodies burnt and broken still
    our stubborn spirits never die.

    So hearken to that heavy Tone
    that resonates within your heart
    The song is strong, the dance is long
    The music's bout to start.

    :NOTHVS:MMXX-IDES-OCT.
    Last edited by NOTHVS on 17:01:14 - 19/12/20

    - In the detail is where you'll find me.-

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    Posted on 10:43:53 - 14/11/20 (3 years ago)
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    Before me stand the golden doors.
    They open unto me.
    From deep within are sagas sung
    of those I've sent to thee.

    The boasts and chants of those I've met
    and bested on the field
    are those who when their own time came,
    to me they did not yield.

    I walk this world without regret,
    of remorse I am quite free,
    for my place in those hallowed halls
    is guaranteed you see.

    Until then I'll turn away
    with a heart that's strong and free.
    For I know when my own time comes,
    it's the Valkyrie I'll see.


    :NOTHVS:MMXX-IDES-NOV.
    Last edited by NOTHVS on 16:59:53 - 19/12/20

    - In the detail is where you'll find me.-

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    Posted on 16:43:23 - 19/12/20 (3 years ago)
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    No timely cryptic warning.
    No vague or half veiled threat.
    No hint or indication,
    that One's resolve is set.

    No clue or hidden meaning.
    No trial or subtle test.
    Just that fear comes to us all
    and will never lets us rest.

    Ahead is dark and shapeless.
    No purpose, goal or quest
    No mystic guide to show the way
    We're here at who's behest?

    Some choose to stride out boldly
    To act without regret.
    To Strive, to struggle against all odds
    Their fate they'd have well met.

    Other's choose not to decide.
    Avoid the strain and strife.
    They'd add not to the conflict.
    To lead the simple life.

    Both choices are quite valid.
    All choices have their price.
    All in their place as they should be.
    are the lions and the mice.

    What value in a credo?
    What merit in a crest?
    Once one's passed into the void.
    Who'll bother to attest?

    :NOTHVS:MMXIX:IDES:DEC:

    - In the detail is where you'll find me.-

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    Posted on 18:16:33 - 05/02/21 (3 years ago)
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    I can't feel my arms.
    I can't feel my legs.
    All I can do is beg.
    For the pain to go.

    My body is broken down.
    The others call me clown.
    They watch me drop the crown.
    And steal everything from me
    .

    But only I can see.
    Only I believe.
    Through all the raging sounds.
    I can feel the bound.

    Connecting me to reality.
    Feeding me with cruelty.
    I need to find a way.

    I need to make them pay.

    To me this is illusion.
    To be free I need solution.
    I just need to find a way.
    I just need to make them pay
    .

    But only I can see.
    Only I believe.
    Through all the raging sounds.
    I can feel the bound.
    Last edited by 1nick1 on 18:17:54 - 05/02/21

    Legally cringe.

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    Posted on 02:37:56 - 06/02/21 (3 years ago)
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    Federal jail
    These bounds are tight
    Could I break free?
    Try, as I might?
    No players to bust me
    Will this world ever trust me?
    Chuckyvoorhes... please.
    See that we will continue to be
    See that the forums will thrive and give
    Players a chance to express themselves
    Whilst you sit inside that federal jail
    And know what you did, allowed us to regale...
    Know that we can learn a lesson, to grow and tell tales
    Of poetry and being free...
    Whilst you sit within your federal jail.

    Thank you, good night.

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    Posted on 04:40:49 - 08/02/21 (3 years ago)
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    - NO ONE -

    No one saw it coming.
    No one saw it fly.
    No one felt the impact of it.
    No one heard the cry.

    No one came a running.
    No one lent a hand.
    No one stood up for their comrade.
    No one gave a damn.

    No one was a hero.
    No one fell that day.
    No one did what had to be done,
    for that was No one's way.

    :NOTHVS:MMXIX:IDES:IAN:

    - In the detail is where you'll find me.-

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    Posted on 02:30:11 - 23/02/21 (3 years ago)
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    Silent night, un-holy rite.
    Full moon casts it's baleful light.
    A silky hiss, a breath like ice.
    We'll gather souls by lethal vice.

    To play the game of death and life
    and dance along the edge's knife.
    We all must heed the ring of steel,
    for the bells of doom hold dark appeal.

    If those who fell unto the blade,
    could rise again, what would they trade?
    What would they give for one more chance,
    So's they could join the Hallows dance?

    :NOTHVS:MMXX:IDES:OCT:

    - In the detail is where you'll find me.-

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    Posted on 10:19:17 - 10/04/21 (3 years ago)
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    I always feel 
    want to eat
    watch movies
    as queen of the world
    cant be bothered
    boring people pass me by
    living in the sky
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    Posted on 15:05:22 - 10/04/21 (3 years ago)
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    FRUITCAKE [2620322]

    I always feel
    want to eat
    watch movies
    as queen of the world
    cant be bothered
    boring people pass me by
    living in the sky
    Doesn't even rhyme!
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    Posted on 07:07:14 - 11/04/21 (3 years ago)
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    - SKYDANCERS -

    Two silver clouds ‘cross a moonlit sky.
    With spirits lighter than air.
    Our way's to be found in this style of our own,
    We fly, we haven’t a care.


    The music, it soars, our dance, it implores.
    our time’s only now just begun.
    Our hearts they yearn for what's yet to be
    So many songs to be sung.


    So breathless we dive, we're enchanted,
    Collapsing again, we’re enthralled.
    Together we’ll arise, once again to-the skies
    Where united, we’ll fly till we fall.

    :NOTHVS:MMXX:IDES:MAR:

    - In the detail is where you'll find me.-

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    Posted on 18:48:15 - 30/04/21 (3 years ago)
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    Pillow Wet



    Hmm...


    Loneliest person smile brightest,

    But i smile brightest when dejected,

    And wiser when damaged,

    And leave when they cared

    They say,

    Kind heart easily broke,

    remembering you is a joke,

    Yet i wish my honey,

    Not hurting like me



    They say,

    Easy laugh easy cry,

    Forgetful people tend to lost in life,

    But i hug my pillow to keep a smile,

    cuz' it held my tears when nobody find



    But i,

    I love rain,

    And praying for rainbow,

    Dreaming living with you like a bow,

    goodnight honeybee last seen 7 years ago.

    Last edited by Savvyna on 18:50:31 - 30/04/21

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    Posted on 13:12:53 - 01/05/21 (3 years ago)
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    - FROM DEEP WITHIN ME -

    The sound of you softly breathing.
    like the hiss of steel on steel.
    The coldness of your cutting stare.
    is all I care to feel.

    Like a thorn I draw you from me.
    a poison from deep within.
    To coat the blade of my desire
    enhance my mortal sin.

    I dance with you in circles
    Painting them in red
    arcs of vivid crimson
    Silver flashes, now they're dead.

    The music in my memory
    within me you reside
    You are a part of my will to kill.
    with you I shall abide.

    :NOTHVS:MMXXI:IDES:APR:

    - In the detail is where you'll find me.-

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    Posted on 13:58:45 - 01/05/21 (3 years ago)
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    I have two poems.

    1.

    ROSES ARE RED, I AM SCARED OF BUGS






    2.

    ROSES ARE RED BUT SOMETHING'S WRONG
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    Posted on 17:28:08 - 01/11/21 (2 years ago)
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    The hour of dawn approaches. My dark eve's work's near done.

    The growing glow bodes another day, for those who'll see that sun.

    Though many'll have fallen to my blade, there'll be many more t'come.

    So long's they stood to meet their fate, who'll care who lost or won?

    :NOTHVS:MMXXI-X-XXI:
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    - In the detail is where you'll find me.-

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    Posted on 05:19:51 - 28/02/22 (2 years ago)
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    For now at least a heart and mind
    are free of doubt and fear.
    Anger and hate are still within,
    yet held check at the rear.-

    Keen and tuned to a purpose dire
    for which they were made true.
    Though there are those who'd bar the way,
    They'll proceed as per cue.-

    Without regret, Without remorse.
    with ease the foe's dispatched.
    Even 'gainst such menace arrayed
    Resolve goes forth, unmatched.-

    The blade, so like an artists' brush
    defines the scene for thee.
    Black and white with greys between,
    Awash in a Crimson sea.-

    :NOTHVS:MMXXII-I-XXIII:

    - In the detail is where you'll find me.-

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