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    Thread created on 04:16:29 - 15/05/20 (3 years ago)
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    Last replied 11:29:15 - 15/05/20 (3 years ago)
    Attempts @ expression
    Is a beguilin' adventure of
    the mental dance
    Benighted the sightings of past
    No strong moon lit light
    Two save the voraciously shy pecks
    Chirp chirp chirp chirp.
    Is all dat iz, delievers….
    on a take of aims of alms of whims
    U not seain' hearin' anythang else.
    But sheer noise of en I'm.
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    Posted on 11:29:15 - 15/05/20 (3 years ago)
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    These sound interesting, but quite confusing and I feel they're mostly going over my head. If that mystery and ambiguity is what you intended, go for it, but I'd improve the grammar so it would be easier to grasp.
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