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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 00:34:20
Oh crap!!!!!

The Constuctive Evil Crticism Pants!

Also known as CECP

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 00:38:45
Dude...definitely "unleash your deadly constructive criticism"

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 01:18:17
just for good laughs....

Critique me.

And no, there will not be any repercussions.

I think that most of my posts are much shorter then they should be and less descriptive than par....

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 01:21:49
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just for good laughs....

Critique me.

And no, there will not be any repercussions.

I think that most of my posts are much shorter then they should be and less descriptive than par....


~sniff~ You've done my job for me. >.>

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 01:24:04
I am scared of Strange and therefore shall not

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 01:28:41
By strange2 [68827]
just for good laughs....

Critique me.

And no, there will not be any repercussions.

I think that most of my posts are much shorter then they should be and less descriptive than par....


Your posts are good, like you said they could be longer and a tad more descriptive, you take pride in spelling which is something I admire, you could be online more too, (not really having a direct effect on your RP, just on advancing plot and ect) .


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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 01:30:38
I love your threads though...

Just your posts are not as exquisite as, for instance, Evil.

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 01:31:47
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By strange2 [68827]
just for good laughs....

Critique me.

And no, there will not be any repercussions.

I think that most of my posts are much shorter then they should be and less descriptive than par....


Your posts are good, like you said they could be longer and a tad more descriptive, you take pride in spelling which is something I admire, you could be online more too, (not really having a direct effect on your RP, just on advancing plot and ect) .


Did we mention Strange suffers from insomnia and thus spends his nights on TC? >.>

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 01:31:54
i have a spell checker in my firefox >.>

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 01:32:30
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i have a spell checker in my firefox >.>


:O

Me too.

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 01:34:31
I don't use firefox, i use-----


SAFARI

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 01:36:14
i would offer constuctive critisism to strange......but i'm afraid that he may kill me:s

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 01:41:39
if he doesn't I will

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 01:42:52
*gasp* why would you do that?

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 02:08:25
I don't know.

you are a noob and Dent is not online right now

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 02:12:37
By strange2 [68827]
just for good laughs....

Critique me.

And no, there will not be any repercussions.

I think that most of my posts are much shorter then they should be and less descriptive than par....


Okay...constructive criticism... constructive criticism...

Meh, it's harder to creep into your brain. You don't really leave enough meat in your posts to give us an insight to your thinking processes. So I'll have to speculate and analyse as I go on this, a bit.

Which, yes, indeed, brings us to the first bit; You tend to post as often as that everyone remembers you're there, watching, hovering, much like a vulture flying circles around it's prey. However, instead of you waiting for them to be dead, you tend to make them dead if they slip to the dark god-modding side of blistering pain.
Everyone applauds you for keeping everyone in line, but, once again, you tend not to put any more words into your posts than necessary. It's just enough to keep your post barely within wide lines of posts accepted in terms of contribution to the story, or depth of one's character, while still being little enough to be absolutely nothing more than filler. (read 'useless, but often fun to read')

And yet, you have this nasty knack of putting even the most complicated situations, into the most simplistic lines ever. ( I don't know about you guys, but this sometimes makes me especially, feel like all my descriptions are nothing but wasted effort >.> )

I'm not saying there's anything wrong with that. Au contraire; It appears that it's so easy to read even newcomers feel allured to have a quick 'Strange' read and join in. How they immediately understand that you're the puppet master of these threads out of those thin, skeletal posts is beyond me.

What I've noticed, though, is that while you offer little to no descriptions in any of your threads, you make exceptions for guns and weapons you own in RL. Your posts light up with vivid motivation like a little boy's eyes who found his gaze fall upon candy.

Also, in the suggestions thread you said you very much preferred the star system.

If I add one plus two together, I seem to get five with you. >.>
Why? Because on one side it appears you despise describing, or even role playing in general. In fact, you bore yourself to death as you play the antagonist, and even when you're not playing an antagonist, you're still boring yourself to death. You type as little as possible..nay..even less than that, while you still actively take part in nearly each and every single thread.

However, if I take in your 'Strange grant' thread, it would appear that you truly are bored. You're waiting for a challenge. A thread in which to go all out in while you try to crick up the experience of your fellow RP-ers in the hope that when the time comes for that very good thread, they'll be an enrichment rather than a bother.

You guide story-lines and help them along, and play like the resisting force if things get too easy, much like a more protective, educating parent who knows that a quick smack and the occasional challenge can bring kids a long way. And yet, you never actually take the main character, the main role inside a thread from beginning to end. You take it temporarily until someone can come along and take over your torch, then you step back and return as the god of wind and pose everyone with as much challenges to keep that torch burning that you end up having to blow yourself in circles.

This is more a constructive speculation than criticism, but I suspect that you are so conscious of your fellow, less experienced RP-er that you don't take the time nor the effort to actually go and submerge yourself into a good ole, slow, filled, meaty post. =/

Edit; And I suspect you, Strange, of liking a good read.


Edited by: Evilpants666 on 11/10/08 at 2:13:51 AM

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 02:47:08
whoah hit the nail on the head. Strange's posts are sometimes bare minimum but its always enough to express something so clearly. And damn Evil are all your criticisms always so long? Mine was just as long maybe shorter since you seperated them into two.

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 02:53:16
Ok,whats wrong with me?*gets shield and holds it up high*

Im ready for some critisisim

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 03:46:47
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Ok,whats wrong with me?*gets shield and holds it up high*

Im ready for some critisisim


Besides being a complete bungling idiot, not much.

But back to the subject

Meh, i post descriptively about the things i am truly interested in. EX: go dig up the "dark forest bar and tavern" thread and look at my under water city post. at that time i was reading a lot of underwater horror type stories, so i did a good job. if i'm just typing about something that isn't my current obsession then i'll rush through it to get on to the next thing. as for taking the main role, it just doesn't interest me. a few hundred days ago, maybe. but any more prefer to play support or be all out antagonist, or my personal favorite which i rarely get to play, is just to switch sides back and forth.




and everyone knows 1 + 2 = 7 >.>

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 08:59:51
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I don't use firefox, i use-----


SAFARI


*high five*

Well if we are on the subject lets get it over and done with, Critique please. Give me your best shot

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 12:10:46
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By coldog111 [606437]
Ok,whats wrong with me?*gets shield and holds it up high*

Im ready for some critisisim


Besides being a complete bungling idiot, not much.

But back to the subject

Meh, i post descriptively about the things i am truly interested in. EX: go dig up the "dark forest bar and tavern" thread and look at my under water city post. at that time i was reading a lot of underwater horror type stories, so i did a good job. if i'm just typing about something that isn't my current obsession then i'll rush through it to get on to the next thing. as for taking the main role, it just doesn't interest me. a few hundred days ago, maybe. but any more prefer to play support or be all out antagonist, or my personal favorite which i rarely get to play, is just to switch sides back and forth.




and everyone knows 1 + 2 = 7 >.>


Hmm...I totally forgot about the tavern thread. However, thank you for the enlightenment. It explains an awful lot.


Urgh Silver, you too?

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 14:09:21
there should be an award for the best thread maker later on.

i would nominate strange, ford, and silver.

okay silvers criticism....

you think too much... that is a first. I have to think about this, Ill finsih it later

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 14:13:05
By TheRedBaron [946551]
there should be an award for the best thread maker later on.

i would nominate strange, ford, and silver.

okay silvers criticism....

you think too much... that is a first. I have to think about this, Ill finsih it later


You said that about Ford, too. >.>

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 14:15:08
yeah. They are almost the same to me. just kayley is on more often.

ford makes good threads though

And kayley should make a Wide open universe 2 to get ford back and rolling

thats if he comes back

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 17:06:38
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And damn Evil are all your criticisms always so long?



Yes, yes they are, apparently.

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 17:14:18
Yes they are man.

Are you a novelist?

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 17:17:33
Uh...sort of. I start a lot of stories but never actually finish them. The only one I actually did, though, was a mere 24 pages long, written in one week for a school art exhibition. >.>

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 20:13:30
Short stories are quite fun to write, although 24 pages exceeds a "short" story, at least for my taste .


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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 20:20:41
nah ive read short stories longer than that i like reading novels with over 200 pages keeps me interested =]

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Posted on Sat Oct 11, 2008 20:25:57
I once wrote a novel, 189 pages long, about like a man who lived in Leningrad. Sad part was that it never got published.

I am kinda annoyed at kayley, i now owe Vermillion 200k

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