that's cool that you spit over this, but tyler dropped it hard on that track and it forces me wanting to compare. it woulda been better if you would of tossed us some original beats, cuz it's a lil hard to take this serious.
no offense. right now your voice leans towards lite club music. neyo, jamie foxx, marcus canty, jonn hart, justin bieber, ect ect.
just keep writing bro. you got flo, an you're getting a grasp on syllables. maybe focus on some "urban" hiphop like lupe fiasco did. bring some positive into the world, an work with music that makes peeps feel good inside. there's just to many mofos out trying to be hard. in the music business, hard is about milked up in rap.
have you, or maybe thought about working with other musicians over the net? now a days, you don't even have to live in the same town to find peeps, and record an EP. each just have to run compatible software so yall can toss tracks back an forth to eachother. then send it to a friend to get mastered.