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SuckMyNoob
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Thread created on Sun Jan 27, 2013 10:40:08
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If you could all give this track a listen be great all feedback positive or negative is welcomed.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=ypOFDTzVyhE


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Posted on Sun Jan 27, 2013 10:42:49
Beat is bland, the rapper sounds like theyre stumbling over their own speed.


I like rap, but unfortunately this isnt something I could listen to.

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Posted on Sun Jan 27, 2013 13:09:35
Tone and rhythm need work.

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Posted on Sun Jan 27, 2013 16:55:33
Tyler rips the shit out of this beat tho bro.


that's cool that you spit over this, but tyler dropped it hard on that track and it forces me wanting to compare. it woulda been better if you would of tossed us some original beats, cuz it's a lil hard to take this serious.

no offense. right now your voice leans towards lite club music. neyo, jamie foxx, marcus canty, jonn hart, justin bieber, ect ect.

just keep writing bro. you got flo, an you're getting a grasp on syllables. maybe focus on some "urban" hiphop like lupe fiasco did. bring some positive into the world, an work with music that makes peeps feel good inside. there's just to many mofos out trying to be hard. in the music business, hard is about milked up in rap.


have you, or maybe thought about working with other musicians over the net? now a days, you don't even have to live in the same town to find peeps, and record an EP. each just have to run compatible software so yall can toss tracks back an forth to eachother. then send it to a friend to get mastered.


have any questions, just pm me.


gl pimp





have to rep my boy in this too. =D

















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