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Thread created on Thu Sep 19, 2013 12:37:12
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so this is my second ever smudge attempt. a little bit of feedback would be nice

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v1: first smudge
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v2:
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v3:
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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 13:43:08
I think there should be a light source somewhere?

Not sure about the smudge on his back by his right arm, or is this the stock?

Not like I am one to talk tbh, I don't know how to do smudge sigs

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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 13:52:58
yeah the smudge coming off him was an experiment. i'll upload a v2 straight away

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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 14:05:49
Cool!

He's got like a purple light source on his face/body, not sure if one could be incorporated?

V3 is better as it looks more merged than V1

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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 14:23:16
yes it does.. i'll see what i can do

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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 14:54:22
I'm not digging this one, I'll post why later.

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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 17:02:38
v3 is better out of all of them, but Im not into the bg colour.. I like the bubbles

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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 17:13:12
thanks for the feedback everyone.

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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 17:33:22
cauli..i am not a professional..but i think the smudge is just too blurry or its over smudged ..you dint bring the texture there...is it your first time at smudging?

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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 18:37:17
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cauli..i am not a professional..but i think the smudge is just too blurry or its over smudged ..you dint bring the texture there...is it your first time at smudging?


ARE YOU f**kING BLIND? LOOK AT THE f**kING THREAD TITLE, YOU TIT.

Time to get my smudging skillz0rs back and I can make a few videos for you personally OP.

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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 18:43:04
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cauli..i am not a professional..but i think the smudge is just too blurry or its over smudged ..you dint bring the texture there...is it your first time at smudging?


ARE YOU f**kING BLIND? LOOK AT THE f**kING THREAD TITLE, YOU TIT.

Time to get my smudging skillz0rs back and I can make a few videos for you personally OP.


meh it is too blurry... i didnt want to over-sharpen it... thats worse than too blurry imo.

your going to make some tut vids benjamin?

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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 18:45:45
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cauli..i am not a professional..but i think the smudge is just too blurry or its over smudged ..you dint bring the texture there...is it your first time at smudging?


ARE YOU f**kING BLIND? LOOK AT THE f**kING THREAD TITLE, YOU TIT.

Time to get my smudging skillz0rs back and I can make a few videos for you personally OP.


meh it is too blurry... i didnt want to over-sharpen it... thats worse than too blurry imo.

your going to make some tut vids benjamin?


Yeah, when I get my awesomeness at smudging back, I shall.

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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 18:59:40
all the people who taught me all had one rule in common
sharpen every layer you smudge on too some degree
a smudge tag with no detail[blurry] is garbage[not talking about this one, there's detail]
but still add more detail and the tag will be pretty sweet
oh and find a way too blend it
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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 19:03:50
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all the people who taught me all had one rule in common
sharpen every layer you smudge on too some degree
a smudge tag with no detail[blurry] is garbage[not talking about this one, there's detail]
but still add more detail and the tag will be pretty sweet
oh and find a way too blend it
gl r+


Sharpening defines the strokes.

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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 19:06:03
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all the people who taught me all had one rule in common
sharpen every layer you smudge on too some degree
a smudge tag with no detail[blurry] is garbage[not talking about this one, there's detail]
but still add more detail and the tag will be pretty sweet
oh and find a way too blend it
gl r+


Sharpening defines the strokes.


yup

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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 20:08:51
thanks for the feedback! there is a small amount of sharpening in this smudge. i learned that mistake from my last smudge sig. but i didnt want to over sharpen it.. :')

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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 20:45:33
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cauli..i am not a professional..but i think the smudge is just too blurry or its over smudged ..you dint bring the texture there...is it your first time at smudging?


ARE YOU f**kING BLIND? LOOK AT THE f**kING THREAD TITLE, YOU TIT.

Time to get my smudging skillz0rs back and I can make a few videos for you personally OP.


You dont have to be rude butthead



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Posted on Thu Sep 19, 2013 20:47:11
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cauli..i am not a professional..but i think the smudge is just too blurry or its over smudged ..you dint bring the texture there...is it your first time at smudging?


ARE YOU f**kING BLIND? LOOK AT THE f**kING THREAD TITLE, YOU TIT.

Time to get my smudging skillz0rs back and I can make a few videos for you personally OP.


Benjamin you dont have to be rude and i am sorry cauli i was on my mob so i couldnt see the title




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Posted on Fri Sep 20, 2013 07:33:06
^ Double post ftw.

Can't give much CnC on smudging since I'm not that good at it myself. The smudging itself looks ok to me. I think you should work on blending the focal more and maybe get more colours from the render.

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