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IamNickMead

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Thread created on Sun Aug 11, 2013 01:38:21
Last replied to on Sun Aug 11, 2013 23:14:32
I'm looking for cnc on this sig please. I think I've done an OK job of it, but there is always room for improvement! I hope you guys like it.

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Posted on Sun Aug 11, 2013 02:42:55
white artifacts around the render...left arm (our left, pics right). Text is imaginative but shite


Its ok, but just ok. Not terribad

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Posted on Sun Aug 11, 2013 12:37:23
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white artifacts around the render...left arm (our left, pics right). Text is imaginative but shite


Its ok, but just ok. Not terribad


Thanks for the cnc, I can't believe i missed the fringing on the render . I've done my best to sort it out, level out the images a bit and improve the test.

what do you think?
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Has anyone else got any cnc?

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Posted on Sun Aug 11, 2013 12:38:57
needs more blending and also add some light on the character..the smudging loos good


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Posted on Sun Aug 11, 2013 16:09:27
I personally don't like the type face, it's to bold for the tag and doesn't fit in.
Try to look for a thinner type, I'm not at my PC but one I can name of the top of my head is 'Bebas' just have a look on DaFont for it.

Also maybe look at blending your focal point in a little more, I know the point is so that's the first part you look at but you don't want it stabbing you in the eye! Apart from that I does look good!

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Posted on Sun Aug 11, 2013 17:41:43
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Thank you both for the cnc!

I've boosted the contrast because I felt it needed a bit more flame. I've done my best to blend and brighten Chandra, I do want her to be a little in you face though, she's a very fierce and powerful character. I've taken on board your feedback though and tried to tone that down a bit.

As for the text, I've given 'Bebas' a go and its a bit too stringy for my personal taste, I've compressed the hight of the font though, I'd agree to was quite bold. I think being shorter take away a lot of its boldness and takes some of the attention away from it. I'm still experimenting with other font to find one that works better, I'll update the image when I dint one I like

Thank you all for the cmc so far, you've all been great. Anymore feedback anyone else has to offer is greatly appreciated!

Nick

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Posted on Sun Aug 11, 2013 23:14:32
Looking a lot better bud, the text is getting there and you've definitely improved the sig overall but like you said keep messing with it and you'll get to the point where you think it's perfect.
Remember I know it sounds cheesy as fu*k but practise does make perfect!
If you need any tips, shoot me a message and I'll give you a hand!

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