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Thread created on Thu Jun 06, 2013 11:58:31
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I usually do stuff completely different, but I decided to follow one of those beginner tutorials, and this is the result:

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Worked a bit on lighting. Not sure if I improved it but you tell me...

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Third Version:


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Text Moved: (Text itself still sucks though...)

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Please comment, I don't mind if you tell me I suck and should try something all over again... Just be honest about it

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Posted on Thu Jun 06, 2013 13:01:01
Good for your first image. you need to work on lighting and background

maybe try something in the background, and maybe move the focal point to the center

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Posted on Thu Jun 06, 2013 13:02:52
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Good for your first image. you need to work on lighting and background

maybe try something in the background, and maybe move the focal point to the center


The problem with my render is that is it cut off a bit to the right... I tried using some fractals to "cover" it, but after about an hour of trying I gave up and simply placed it to the corner.

And I will work a bit on lighting, lets see what I can do

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Posted on Thu Jun 06, 2013 14:10:47
Added a second version, although I am still not really satisfied. Still working

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Posted on Thu Jun 06, 2013 14:16:21
The second pic looks smudged lol. R+

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Posted on Thu Jun 06, 2013 14:18:10
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The second pic looks smudged lol. R+


I like to work a bit with smudging when creating lighting, yes. Is it destroying the image?

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Posted on Thu Jun 06, 2013 14:21:22
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The second pic looks smudged lol. R+


I like to work a bit with smudging when creating lighting, yes. Is it destroying the image?


I think your first one looks better. Im not a fan of pictures type of sigs i prefer txt. But anyway it is a bit dark, and as my point of you the txt looks out of place just like randomly placed. and the rest of the space looks a bit empty. Well that was my opinion on it, Just do what you think looks good you get the hang of it. R+ btw keep trying amigo you will be great soon



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Posted on Thu Jun 06, 2013 14:22:34
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The second pic looks smudged lol. R+


I like to work a bit with smudging when creating lighting, yes. Is it destroying the image?


I think your first one looks better. Im not a fan of pictures type of sigs i prefer txt. But anyway it is a bit dark, and as my point of you the txt looks out of place just like randomly placed. and the rest of the space looks a bit empty. Well that was my opinion on it, Just do what you think looks good you get the hang of it. R+ btw keep trying amigo you will be great soon



I suck at text... I just placed that there for the sake of it

And yeah, it does look a bit empty.

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Posted on Thu Jun 06, 2013 14:23:12
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The second pic looks smudged lol. R+


I like to work a bit with smudging when creating lighting, yes. Is it destroying the image?


I think your first one looks better. Im not a fan of pictures type of sigs i prefer txt. But anyway it is a bit dark, and as my point of you the txt looks out of place just like randomly placed. and the rest of the space looks a bit empty. Well that was my opinion on it, Just do what you think looks good you get the hang of it. R+ btw keep trying amigo you will be great soon



I suck at text... I just placed that there for the sake of it

And yeah, it does look a bit empty.


Third version looks better



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Posted on Thu Jun 06, 2013 16:34:10
Thanks for the feedback!

Other opinions?

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Posted on Thu Jun 06, 2013 16:59:07
Can you move the text just the slightest bit as at first glimpse i thought it said Aux


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Posted on Thu Jun 06, 2013 17:05:47
Done... Any suggestions other than the text though (I will get to that after some more tutorials specifically on text)

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Posted on Thu Jun 06, 2013 17:34:13
The second one is just an optical flare ...

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Posted on Thu Jun 06, 2013 17:35:54
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The second one is just an optical flare ...


Sorry, I should have written more clearly, for the second one I was just experimenting with the text. Just a simple image but the point was to practice on my text

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