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Thread created on Mon Jun 03, 2013 04:39:04
Last replied to on Tue Jun 04, 2013 03:50:10
Can I get some feedbacks on these tags so that i can improve.
Both Good&Bad CnCs are welcomed. thanks.

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Posted on Mon Jun 03, 2013 06:03:53
1st one is alright. Text needs work. Probably a 5/10 if I were to rate.
2nd smudge is far too simple and in the same direction. Doesn't have variety. Just get bored with it really.
3rd needs the focal strengthened. Maybe play with the lighting to do this... Composition is pretty good though so props on that.
4th already said earlier that your focal is whack and took awhile to realize there was a guy there.

3rd is by far the best mate. A solid 7-low8 as far as ranking goes. Great job and keep the improvement. Also note that smudge isn't for everyone. It takes tons of practice and playing (I have been playing with it for about a year and I am finally getting some success with it haha ).

Best of luck and R+

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Posted on Mon Jun 03, 2013 06:33:08
By -Agent- [1196263]
1st one is alright. Text needs work. Probably a 5/10 if I were to rate.
2nd smudge is far too simple and in the same direction. Doesn't have variety. Just get bored with it really.
3rd needs the focal strengthened. Maybe play with the lighting to do this... Composition is pretty good though so props on that.
4th already said earlier that your focal is whack and took awhile to realize there was a guy there.

3rd is by far the best mate. A solid 7-low8 as far as ranking goes. Great job and keep the improvement. Also note that smudge isn't for everyone. It takes tons of practice and playing (I have been playing with it for about a year and I am finally getting some success with it haha ).

Best of luck and R+


great CnC ... thanks bro



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Posted on Mon Jun 03, 2013 16:53:50
Anymore??

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Posted on Mon Jun 03, 2013 17:35:31
i dont really like the wiz one but others are sweet R+

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Posted on Tue Jun 04, 2013 01:25:31
By Yukondesigns [1259994]
i dont really like the wiz one but others are sweet R+


thanks

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Posted on Tue Jun 04, 2013 01:42:47
Honestly digging them all but

1. I'd like to see some color in there, the design is great, just needs something to make it pop, and make it vivid, maybe make the man in color, with the other light points in the design points of color, or give the whole thing some color, either way, its a great design and i feel like some some color will make it phenomenal

2. I actually Really like this one, While i do again if you look at it one way, the strokes are all the same direction, but for some reason it works, i think it would be nice if his left shoulder was clearly defined like the right side, it looks smudged into the design, and while i realize this is a smudge piece, the right side is clearly defined and looks nicer. But overall awesome

3. I Like this one, no real big issues here, Nice design, Maybe see what it would look like to bring the character more into the center of attention, Its great it blends so well with the background, however i'm curious what it what look like if you maybe screwed with his lighting, or more clearly seperated him.


4. Yeah if agent had not of pointed out the man in the sig, i wouldnt have been able to tell, The design work is nice, and i can see you put some skill and time into it, therefore i like it, but i cant really gather a clear theme from it

All that being said, I would buy all of these if they were in auction, Really great


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Posted on Tue Jun 04, 2013 03:50:10
By rcking1110 [489169]
Honestly digging them all but

1. I'd like to see some color in there, the design is great, just needs something to make it pop, and make it vivid, maybe make the man in color, with the other light points in the design points of color, or give the whole thing some color, either way, its a great design and i feel like some some color will make it phenomenal

2. I actually Really like this one, While i do again if you look at it one way, the strokes are all the same direction, but for some reason it works, i think it would be nice if his left shoulder was clearly defined like the right side, it looks smudged into the design, and while i realize this is a smudge piece, the right side is clearly defined and looks nicer. But overall awesome

3. I Like this one, no real big issues here, Nice design, Maybe see what it would look like to bring the character more into the center of attention, Its great it blends so well with the background, however i'm curious what it what look like if you maybe screwed with his lighting, or more clearly seperated him.


4. Yeah if agent had not of pointed out the man in the sig, i wouldnt have been able to tell, The design work is nice, and i can see you put some skill and time into it, therefore i like it, but i cant really gather a clear theme from it

All that being said, I would buy all of these if they were in auction, Really great


thanks man


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