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Posted on Sun May 26, 2013 18:36:28
The stock is to blurry and camouflaged into the background

Maybe try making it stand out nicer?

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Posted on Sun May 26, 2013 18:48:42
Sharpened it

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Posted on Sun May 26, 2013 18:54:50
In my opinion it seems a bit spammed with floating debris... It kinda takes away from the tag a bit. It not bad but could definitely be improved upon. Sometimes less is more. Just gotta find that balance you know.

R+ anywho.

EDIT: Also if I'm not mistaken was topaz used? Looking back at it the render has a sort of fake/plastic qualities in which I generally associate to the causes of topaz...

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Posted on Sun May 26, 2013 18:57:27
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Sharpened it


The blur is sorted i think the colours are a bit to close for my liking, but thats a personal taste

Looks pretty good looking forward to seeing it after everyone else cnc is implemented x ,

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Posted on Sun May 26, 2013 19:22:43
To be honest it sucks. Seriously.

Like Agent said, you over did it with the C4D's. It caused the tag to have zero flow. A mess really. It could also use some light sources. (This tag actually needs one) The lighting could also be improved. Maybe try adding a Curves layer above everything to help blending. And like Hades, this style has been long overused. SWITCH IT UP!


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