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Thread created on Wed May 22, 2013 12:50:58
Last replied to on Fri May 24, 2013 15:56:02
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I know the text is horrible i just splashed it on and added a clipping mask. i was in a hurry to finish it. sue me >.>
Looks pretty good but i would like to get an experts advice on this.

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It started as a smudge but somehow lost the smudg focus along the way. Any suggestions regarding the smudging? or anything that could improve the smudge?

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The text is small. Thats my complaints with this tag. yours?

Last Edited: Thu May 23, 2013 20:25:58
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Posted on Wed May 22, 2013 15:55:53
Pretty epic but if you had made the left part blend into the direction of the guy, it would have been better

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Posted on Wed May 22, 2013 16:39:35
lol thanks.
guess i read the flow wrong

Anything else?

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Posted on Wed May 22, 2013 16:50:59
im sorry but that does not look "pretty good" at all even for a first smudge

the smudges are very sloppy due to the low strength used , the flow does not really fit with the render

some parts of the smudge are overexposed (beside the head) and near the orb ball thingy

honestly if i were you i would scratch this and start all over .. if your having trouble finding ways to smudge i would suggest to look at other smudge pieces of deviantart .. just typing smudge will get you plenty

good luck

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Posted on Wed May 22, 2013 17:42:42
thanks for the feedback.

Honestly i cant find settings or bruushes to use for smudging.
The strentgh settings were 60% to 70%. Thats low?

I dont get what you mean by over exposed. Should i have turned down the opacity.

I will search for some smudge tuts. Thanks

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Posted on Wed May 22, 2013 17:43:22
I really like this tag buddy!
R+

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Posted on Wed May 22, 2013 18:04:52
Can i get some more cnc so i can get to making another one please

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Posted on Wed May 22, 2013 18:30:12
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thanks for the feedback.

Honestly i cant find settings or bruushes to use for smudging.
The strentgh settings were 60% to 70%. Thats low?

I dont get what you mean by over exposed. Should i have turned down the opacity.

I will search for some smudge tuts. Thanks


Overexposed means that it is to bright.


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Posted on Wed May 22, 2013 18:34:36
Thank you. Guess thats all im gonna get for now. Ill update a second smudge tag soon...

EDIT: Second tag added!

Last Edited: Thu May 23, 2013 14:05:15
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Posted on Thu May 23, 2013 14:06:29
bump

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Posted on Thu May 23, 2013 20:26:20
bumpity bump

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Posted on Thu May 23, 2013 23:31:49
For the first one, double focal and brightness just seems to be all over the place haha.

2nd one I quite like.

3rd one lacks flow and text creates a double focal.

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Posted on Thu May 23, 2013 23:52:12
Double focals are pretty hard to get right.
yeah i cant get them right for now.

Last Edited: Fri May 24, 2013 08:43:54
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Posted on Fri May 24, 2013 15:56:02
Nice smudge work mate only crit is on 3# use a low opacity to smudge the hair at the ends a little to help blend it in

Also remove some of the white orbs from the dark areas

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