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Thread created on Mon May 20, 2013 17:33:21
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very rusty

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Posted on Mon May 20, 2013 19:28:33
It's... new.
The displacement of the body is a bit weirdo.

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Posted on Mon May 20, 2013 19:30:51
Not a fan of the rectangle shifted to the right a tad at the bottom.
Try blending the render a tiny bit more.

R+ though

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Posted on Mon May 20, 2013 19:34:39
Hades's point.

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Posted on Mon May 20, 2013 20:20:09
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Not a fan of the rectangle shifted to the right a tad at the bottom.
Try blending the render a tiny bit more.

R+ though


That's what I meant by displaced

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Posted on Mon May 20, 2013 21:44:32
got rid of the displacement, nd any attempt to improve the blending seems to backfire :/


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Posted on Tue May 21, 2013 07:19:38
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Posted on Tue May 21, 2013 12:47:24
c'mon... need some more CNC to improve.. help me out here pweas! .__.

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Posted on Wed May 22, 2013 05:35:50
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Posted on Wed May 22, 2013 05:59:04
What program was this made in?

As far as cnc, I think you could have used a better c4d on the left side but not bad. Your attempt at making the lighting right was pretty fair for a beginner. The issue your running into is if the light source is on the left side of the tag, the background right next to his shoulder (right side of the tag) shouldn't be so light if it doesn't reflect some of that light onto his shoulder.

Sorry if that doesn't make sense. I can try to explain it if you need me to in mail - just mail me if explanation is needed.


Also as far as coloring version 2 is much better but you need to remove some of the gradients from his tie... Hitman's trademark has and always will be those silverballers and his suit. That being said the tie should still resemble a sort of purer red. (this doesn't have to be its just personal opinion based of trademarks and gameplay experience).

Hope this helps. Thats not everything but goes through the basics.

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Posted on Thu May 23, 2013 18:31:13
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What program was this made in?

As far as cnc, I think you could have used a better c4d on the left side but not bad. Your attempt at making the lighting right was pretty fair for a beginner. The issue your running into is if the light source is on the left side of the tag, the background right next to his shoulder (right side of the tag) shouldn't be so light if it doesn't reflect some of that light onto his shoulder.

Sorry if that doesn't make sense. I can try to explain it if you need me to in mail - just mail me if explanation is needed.


Also as far as coloring version 2 is much better but you need to remove some of the gradients from his tie... Hitman's trademark has and always will be those silverballers and his suit. That being said the tie should still resemble a sort of purer red. (this doesn't have to be its just personal opinion based of trademarks and gameplay experience).

Hope this helps. Thats not everything but goes through the basics.


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yeah I get that.. still have a lot to learn, especially about lighting. one of the major problems for me is finding a decent C4D to go with the tag.. nd about the tie, yeah sure ill try that!

nd thanks for the compliments

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Posted on Sat May 25, 2013 06:22:31
up!

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Posted on Mon May 27, 2013 08:21:42
updated!

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Posted on Mon May 27, 2013 08:27:30
By far the best version. That c4d is still killing it for me though... But its not bad. Far better than most beginners (definitely me when I started out). Keep with it. If no other cnc go ahead and auction it or give it away if you want more rates. (giveaways are always good when you start out).

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Posted on Tue May 28, 2013 17:54:01
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By far the best version. That c4d is still killing it for me though... But its not bad. Far better than most beginners (definitely me when I started out). Keep with it. If no other cnc go ahead and auction it or give it away if you want more rates. (giveaways are always good when you start out).


I know. But I have a hard time finding the perfect C4D. I might auction it after I change the C4D.

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Posted on Fri Jul 19, 2013 19:05:37
new picture uploaded!

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Posted on Sat Jul 20, 2013 19:24:59
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