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Thread created on Sun May 19, 2013 17:23:54
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Posted on Sun May 19, 2013 18:32:16
That wall ruins what you have done on top mate.
The foreground stuff is very saturated. Try bringing it down a tad.
Also the 2 black lines on the top and bottom are not appealing to me at all.

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Posted on Sun May 19, 2013 18:35:10
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That wall ruins what you have done on top mate.
The foreground stuff is very saturated. Try bringing it down a tad.
Also the 2 black lines on the top and bottom are not appealing to me at all.


ok, i'll try correct it.
Any suggestions about what i can place as background if i remove the wall?

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Posted on Sun May 19, 2013 18:39:31
I duno bud. Did you try is with just a dark blue? Maybe just add more of the shit you have done to the right over to the left.
Its all down to you mate. I would need to be messing around with it myself to come up with something to do and most stuff is just trial and error.

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Posted on Sun May 19, 2013 19:04:08
Damn better than what i could do
looks cool to me bro


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Posted on Sun May 19, 2013 19:08:32
Very bad stock selection, scrap it and start from scratch but this time find a stock that you can work more effectively with and incorporate depth and flow into also don't bunch up all of your effects on one side try spreading them out a bit more.

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Posted on Sun May 19, 2013 19:09:49
Too crowd or right and just walls on left.
Maybe you can add some brushes, like below sig of brooksys
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Create a BG urself using C4Ds and brushes,
would be better than adding some wallpapers

Render is great, works too...Rated +

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Posted on Sun May 19, 2013 19:24:05
just tried cropping out those black lines at top and bottom,
looks alot a better when removed

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Posted on Sun May 19, 2013 21:16:56
maybe blur the wall slightly so it looks more in the background

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Posted on Mon May 20, 2013 04:16:19
Not bad mate. Just gonna follow up on the crowded part at the right as well as the background.
Easy to correct

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