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Thread created on Sat Mar 16, 2013 22:08:19
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Hello GFX people,

I'm new to this game and found this part of forum most interesting. Thus I decided to try and create some tags too. I'd like to display my attempts here, hoping to get some feedback and eventually get better.

Selling these grapics is not my goal, not yet anyway. Just experimenting and learning. So please, comments are very welcome.

Carol

5. Linda
Trying a different style
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4. Womanoid
Check my profile for used stocks
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4. Zatanna
Experimenting with a vertical tag
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3. Black Ops
v2 Thx to BrOoKsY's comments
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2. Dark Phoenix (;Marvel Female);
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Credits
[url]http://s2.photobucket.com/user/Neetox/media/Renders/DarkPhoenix.png.html?sort=3&o=14[/url]



1. Faction Image
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v2 - Transparancy removed (;Thx Sam); & some extra shade added

Credits
[url]http:;//thegreenrabbit.deviantart.com/art/Desert-Sand-Stock-250712139[/url]
[url]http:;//flhomeexperts.homestead.com/Luxury_Intracostal_Property.jpg[/url]
[url]http:;//i.imm.io/ZC6s.jpeg[/url]


Last Edited: Wed Jul 03, 2013 20:18:53
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Posted on Sat Mar 16, 2013 22:15:37
the metal at the bottom of the lightbulb is transparent

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Posted on Sat Mar 16, 2013 22:18:57
You're right. I didn't notice. Will fix.
Thx

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Posted on Sat Mar 16, 2013 22:22:53
Yeah that annoyed me, but I really like the idea

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Posted on Sat Mar 16, 2013 22:38:14
Added two more versions.

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Posted on Sun Mar 17, 2013 21:05:55
I think v2 is best

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Posted on Fri Mar 29, 2013 20:22:39
Added Dark Phoenix tag to original post.
What do you think?

Thx,
Carol

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Posted on Sun Mar 31, 2013 11:51:19
Added LA I was working on for Wild Irish Bitch
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Posted on Sun Mar 31, 2013 12:01:41
R-

You have lost 100% of your drug addiction by rehabilitating 934 times for $233,500,000.
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Oh no, forget my previous comment, it may harm someone in graphics.
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Posted on Sun Mar 31, 2013 12:04:32
Thx for your rating, but care to tell me why R- or R+? I'm looking for CnC to imrove my GFX

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Posted on Wed Apr 24, 2013 19:57:54
Fourth tag added.
CnC appreciated

C.

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Posted on Tue Apr 30, 2013 19:16:11
5th tag added

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Posted on Tue Apr 30, 2013 19:26:53
Love the new tag mate - Cnc

Text is too far from the focal and light sources and dark spots should be enhanced more, maybe blur parts of the BG to help draw attention to the focal

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Posted on Tue Apr 30, 2013 19:37:08
Thank you, much appreciated.

I've been struggling with the text (who isn't at first ) because of color in the tag. Couldn't find a suitable text color when I placed it closer to focal. But will try again and again.

The other cnc (blur and enhancements): You're right, the tag looks a bit "crowded" to me. Extra blur (soft) and some accents might be the cure. Will try

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Posted on Tue Apr 30, 2013 19:52:50
I like that faction image one a lot. That's pretty neat.

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Posted on Tue Apr 30, 2013 19:57:20
Im loving the CoD one! R+

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Posted on Tue Apr 30, 2013 22:34:10
Thank you for comments.
V2 of the CoD up

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Posted on Wed May 01, 2013 07:22:16
Yeah mate looks ace to me love the text placement and the way you darken it to match into the bg

You could brighten the light source a tad more but play around with it and see what you think ?

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Posted on Sun May 26, 2013 22:25:55
Added a vertical tag. I'm not sure it's a thing to do, but I liked the render. Not happy with text placement, seems even harder with a vertical tag.
Also cleaned up my original post a bit

Comments welcome.
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Posted on Sun May 26, 2013 23:35:07
The Dark Phoenix Tag

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Posted on Mon May 27, 2013 07:21:43
Vertical tag sucks. Not trying to be rude but its very simple and looks like a render on a background with a few brushes with added shadows. Its far too basic and bland. Plus it does not flow at all.

Here is a good example of a good attempt at a vertical tag...

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by ~Mornothly (DEVIANTART = browse.deviantart.com/art/Viking-vertical-sig-191801061)

Keep in my that is not the best example of everything but the general concept on which yours lacks is there. The focal in that one is strong and the piece just has a general flow. Hope any of this is a help... I know not many people (at least here) do vertical tags so props to you for venturing out.

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Posted on Mon May 27, 2013 07:52:52
I creamed a little over that example. Looks so realistic.

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Posted on Mon May 27, 2013 08:05:49
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I creamed a little over that example. Looks so realistic.


Yeah. The only part that I don't particularly fancy is on the bottom left... things got a little too sharp with the texture... But when I came across it I added it to my favs and thought it would be a good example

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Posted on Mon May 27, 2013 12:16:24
Thank you for advice and example. Will have a go at it, meaning starting all over :-)

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Posted on Mon May 27, 2013 16:35:57
rated + your improvimg immensely , keep at it


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Posted on Mon May 27, 2013 17:45:36
Agreed. R+ Carol

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Posted on Mon May 27, 2013 18:27:50
Thank you guys, appreciated.
Please keep CnC-ing and don't hold back. I prefer hard and honnest critisism over sweet talk cuz sweet talk will learn me shitz. All I ask is if you tell me this or that sig sux, you also tell me why (or at least a hint or a tip to improve it).



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Posted on Sun Jun 30, 2013 09:34:40
Added a photo manipulation, you can check my profile for stocks I used on this one.
I like how the girl turned out, but having problem with background. Tips please

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Posted on Sun Jun 30, 2013 09:47:13
Where is this manip...?

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Posted on Sun Jun 30, 2013 09:52:00
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Where is this manip...?


the first one, well the first one she just now added. check out her profile for the original image and her progress, looks pretty awesome

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Posted on Wed Jul 03, 2013 20:14:30
Little time for some more training.

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