Thread created on Thu Nov 29, 2012 21:13:13 Last replied to on Fri Nov 30, 2012 18:43:58
I keep finding these all around Torn. Grammatically speaking, all titles should be capitalized, with the exception of articles and coordinating conjunctions. I posted one of these about how "Torn of the Dead" wasn't capitalized a few weeks ago. Anyway, here are a few that I found just now: NOTE: I am not in any way attempting to advertise my bazaar, I just found these most easily noticeable this way.
Te thing that's really wrong is that some things are properly capitalized while some others aren't. For example, Bag of Tootsie Rolls is correct, however Big Box of chocolate bars is not correct. Things in red are incorrect. I'll keep scouting the site for these mishaps, there are a lot...
Thanks! Here they are in a list so it's not too annoying (I added a few, some are titles of pages):
Generic wrapping paper
Christmas wrapping paper
Birthday wrapping paper
Bunch of flowers
Box of extra strong mints
Big box of chocolate bars
Pack of blank CDs
Pack of music CDs
MP3 player
CD player
Hard drive
Soap on a rope
Pack of cuban cigars
Gold ring
First aid kit
Tank top STUFF I ADDED STARTS HERE
Torn of the dead (Page Title http://www.torn.com/competitionzombies.php)
Personal computer
Simple virus
Stealth virus
Polymorphic virus
Tunneling virus
Armored virus
Manage rooms (Page Title http://www.torn.com/managerooms.php)
When you get stealth hospitalized, it just says "someone" instead of "Someone" like it used to. (Not sure if this counts)
Bring a friend (Page Title http://www.torn.com/bringafriend.php)
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Some Awards (Torn Wiki http://www.torn.com/wiki/Awards)
The incorrect awards are:
-Attacks won
-Defends won
-Critical hits
-Enemies run away
-Kill streak
-Respect earned
-Run aways
-Computer crimes
-City finds
Hope this helps the site, I'll find some more for you when I get out of the hospital.
P.S. Sorry if it's too much, as I said, there are a lot.
I just went through the entire items list and fixed all items. I've corrected those three pages and pushed. The award details on wiki I don't manage so the people responsible for that will need to fix it. Although I don't see them as a big priority.
![ColonelWaffles7 [1574555]](http://awardimages.torn.com/1574555-18155-large.png "ColonelWaffles7 [1574555]")
![RatedR [72498]](http://awardimages.torn.com/72498-21590-large.png "RatedR [72498]")
![Chedburn [1]](http://awardimages.torn.com/1-67459-large.png "Chedburn [1]")
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