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Lonestar

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Thread created on Thu Jun 21, 2012 00:24:50
Last replied to on Thu Jun 21, 2012 17:13:43
To me, this doesnt make sense!


You carefully move up to Paige's property and throw the roll of toilet paper over the Private Island. The instant it leaves your hand, Paige's steps outside. With their impressive speed, they leap over and pin you to the floor.

*Police arrive and haul you away*

Paige's steps outside.....there shouldnt be an apostraphe nor an extra 'S'!!!

Damn....im a grammar nazi

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Posted on Thu Jun 21, 2012 07:26:47
Correct
Confirming
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Posted on Thu Jun 21, 2012 17:13:43
Fixed thanks

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