I think Amba wont be rapping to be honnest. He/she is a scammer and prolly just wantedt o make a quick buck.
I have a suggestion tho Skunk. Update the first thread with the brackets and remove Amba. I would suggest you include droppa since he is one of the oldschool guys.
Hate on me, but you can't deny skill
I crush all the momentum you guys build with my eyes sealed
1)Sure. I haven't heard from Karna in a while, so I'm not sure whats up with that. Greegs actually mailed me yesterday said he was busy and is probably dropping out. What I'm going to do is revise the bracket, add droppa in Greegs spot and put you in Amba's spot.
2) If you want to give your opponent a heads up mail before you start, that would be nice. You can go ahead and start whenever though if you want. Although remember: I think going 2nd and having the last word is an advantage.
Alright here's the new bracket, I'll put it in the OP too. Fisheyes, since you have a new opponent you can either redo your first volley, let it stand, see if earlnigma wants to go first, or whatever. You guys work it out.
I'm your worst nightmare,
Don't f**k with me or you'll get f**ked up,
You're as dull as the old queen's cup,
When I speak, get ready to bow,
And kiss my feet,
Or get ready to get beat,
Don't talk to me,
Without paying of fee,
10,000 bucks,
Just to get f**ked,
I'm the best of thr best,
Don't bother me, just mess with the rest,
And maybe you'll be able to stand infront of me,
Like I said, it won't be free,
Now just run off,
You're no match for me.
Hope I did ohkay:)
Oh sh*t, looks like I get to rap against a fairy,
I'm magic on these rhymes, so you can call me Harry,
You're throwing p*ssy dust, b*tch that sh*t ain't scary,
Pullin' out the Magnum, you go soft like a berry,
Whatchya gonna do when I pull on the trigger?
Act like a b*tch and try to bounce like Tiger?
Or will you stand around and prove that you're bigger?
Know this won't get broke up, boy this ain't no Jerry Springer.
Come at me chirping 'bout how you're gettin' cash,
B*tch, you don't even know what it's like to push grass,
You've never held a gun, never even heard the blast,
If you step to me then you'll surely get slashed,
We can scrap it out, but you'll still get smashed,
F*ckin' with a Crook Boy, a criminal with class,
I'm done spittin' now, time to turn your ass to ash.
- - - -
Aha, I hope I did okay.
Can't wait for a response though.
Yo Harry,
Are you callin me a fairy?
Well this fairy is bout to get some dust,
My nose will be filled with crust,
Yea...
I'm f**king crazy,
Haha, yea, I'm real "lazy,"
That's why I'm makin 550k a pay,
And you're makin que? (Que=what is Spanish)
Oh yea, zero bucks,
I'm like a truck, and I don't give a f**k,
You say I'm likes berry,
B**change, I'm a cherry,
I'm sweet yet sour,
And oh yeah, I got lots of power,
I can make you go bye bye in just one hour,
I remember the first I pulled the trigger,
All I saw was one black figure,
Then I realized..
I'm a true born killer,
I'm like MJ, I'll give you a thriller,
Now go on,
What were you sayin? Turn my ass to ash?
Hurry up Mr.Flash,
You god damn poor white trash...
------
Not my best work
Look at my profile. The 3 "signature" things are free. They're in between the red lines. Just ask for their image codes.
By FishEyes [495810]
Yo Harry,
Are you callin me a fairy?
Well this fairy is bout to get some dust,
My nose will be filled with crust,
Yea...
I'm f**king crazy,
Haha, yea, I'm real "lazy,"
That's why I'm makin 550k a pay,
And you're makin que? (Que=what is Spanish)
Oh yea, zero bucks,
I'm like a truck, and I don't give a f**k,
You say I'm likes berry,
B**change, I'm a cherry,
I'm sweet yet sour,
And oh yeah, I got lots of power,
I can make you go bye bye in just one hour,
I remember the first I pulled the trigger,
All I saw was one black figure,
Then I realized..
I'm a true born killer,
I'm like MJ, I'll give you a thriller,
Now go on,
What were you sayin? Turn my ass to ash?
Hurry up Mr.Flash,
You god damn poor white trash...
------
Not my best work
You're a truck? Quit actin' like you're Optimus Prime,
I'll show you sour, I'm the lemon you're the lime,
Ladies say I'm sweet, but not when I rhyme,
Cause that's the time when I fill my mind with grime,
Wanna reminisce 'bout when I shot my first nine?
Or what about when I railed my first line?
Bank jobs that pay off, you know I do that crime,
550k in virtual bucks ain't worth a dime.
You can talk in foreign, I'll just talk in numbers,
Pullin' out the AK, time for eternal slumber,
Your arms crossed, coffin layin' six feet under,
Left 4 Dead reference; rip you up like a Hunter,
Smoke so much, then acid trips make you wonder,
I'm the Alpha Wolf, you're a bunny, look like Thumper,
Ask your dumb bitch questions that'll stump her,
Slit her throat, then were off to the lake so I can dump her.
By MrBlonde [1598366]
Wow.... lulz. -R This is terrible. All of it.
Ahm why is it that nobody can put themselves out there without som jackass popping up his head out of the sand/his own asshole to be like "SUCKS BRO". Keep standing on the sideline hating, everyone thinks its super attractive.
Alright again, give me a bit to read through a few times. As always, input is welcome. It
s 6pm TC time right now, I'm just waking up so give me a bit but if there's no input from someone else I'll have a winner by say, midnight TC.
I'm your worst nightmare,
Don't f**k with me or you'll get f**ked up,
You're as dull as the old queen's cup,
When I speak, get ready to bow,
And kiss my feet,
Or get ready to get beat,
Don't talk to me,
Without paying of fee,
10,000 bucks,
Just to get f**ked,
I'm the best of thr best,
Don't bother me, just mess with the rest,
And maybe you'll be able to stand infront of me,
Like I said, it won't be free,
Now just run off,
You're no match for me.
earlNigma
Oh sh*t, looks like I get to rap against a fairy,
I'm magic on these rhymes, so you can call me Harry,
You're throwing p*ssy dust, b*tch that sh*t ain't scary,
Pullin' out the Magnum, you go soft like a berry,
Whatchya gonna do when I pull on the trigger?
Act like a b*tch and try to bounce like Tiger?
Or will you stand around and prove that you're bigger?
Know this won't get broke up, boy this ain't no Jerry Springer.
Come at me chirping 'bout how you're gettin' cash,
B*tch, you don't even know what it's like to push grass,
You've never held a gun, never even heard the blast,
If you step to me then you'll surely get slashed,
We can scrap it out, but you'll still get smashed,
F*ckin' with a Crook Boy, a criminal with class,
I'm done spittin' now, time to turn your ass to ash.
fisheyes
Yo Harry,
Are you callin me a fairy?
Well this fairy is bout to get some dust,
My nose will be filled with crust,
Yea...
I'm f**king crazy,
Haha, yea, I'm real "lazy,"
That's why I'm makin 550k a pay,
And you're makin que? (Que=what is Spanish)
Oh yea, zero bucks,
I'm like a truck, and I don't give a f**k,
You say I'm likes berry,
B**change, I'm a cherry,
I'm sweet yet sour,
And oh yeah, I got lots of power,
I can make you go bye bye in just one hour,
I remember the first I pulled the trigger,
All I saw was one black figure,
Then I realized..
I'm a true born killer,
I'm like MJ, I'll give you a thriller,
Now go on,
What were you sayin? Turn my ass to ash?
Hurry up Mr.Flash,
You god damn poor white trash...
earlNigma
You're a truck? Quit actin' like you're Optimus Prime,
I'll show you sour, I'm the lemon you're the lime,
Ladies say I'm sweet, but not when I rhyme,
Cause that's the time when I fill my mind with grime,
Wanna reminisce 'bout when I shot my first nine?
Or what about when I railed my first line?
Bank jobs that pay off, you know I do that crime,
550k in virtual bucks ain't worth a dime.
You can talk in foreign, I'll just talk in numbers,
Pullin' out the AK, time for eternal slumber,
Your arms crossed, coffin layin' six feet under,
Left 4 Dead reference; rip you up like a Hunter,
Smoke so much, then acid trips make you wonder,
I'm the Alpha Wolf, you're a bunny, look like Thumper,
Ask your dumb bitch questions that'll stump her,
Slit her throat, then were off to the lake so I can dump her
I'm your worst nightmare,
Don't f**k with me or you'll get f**ked up,
You're as dull as the old queen's cup,
When I speak, get ready to bow,
And kiss my feet,
Or get ready to get beat,
Don't talk to me,
Without paying of fee,
10,000 bucks,
Just to get f**ked,
I'm the best of thr best,
Don't bother me, just mess with the rest,
And maybe you'll be able to stand infront of me,
Like I said, it won't be free,
Now just run off,
You're no match for me.
The rhyming and rythm, I just cant really feel this tbh.
Your best line is
"I'm the best of the best,
Don't bother me, just mess with the rest,"
But that can also be improved
"You came to test the best of the best?
Don't bother me, just go ahead and mess with the rest"
By EarlNigma [928135]
Oh sh*t, looks like I get to rap against a fairy,
I'm magic on these rhymes, so you can call me Harry,
You're throwing p*ssy dust, b*tch that sh*t ain't scary,
Pullin' out the Magnum, you go soft like a berry,
Whatchya gonna do when I pull on the trigger?
Act like a b*tch and try to bounce like Tiger?
Or will you stand around and prove that you're bigger?
Know this won't get broke up, boy this ain't no Jerry Springer.
Come at me chirping 'bout how you're gettin' cash,
B*tch, you don't even know what it's like to push grass,
You've never held a gun, never even heard the blast,
If you step to me then you'll surely get slashed,
We can scrap it out, but you'll still get smashed,
F*ckin' with a Crook Boy, a criminal with class,
I'm done spittin' now, time to turn your ass to ash
This one, Your first part is way better than the second part, Only thing I would change in it is:
Oh sh*t, looks like I get to rap against a fairy,
I'm magic on these rhymes, so you can call me Harry,
You're throwing p*ssy dust, b*tch that sh*t ain't even scary,
Pullin' out the Magnum, you go soft like a berry.
Whatchya gonna do when I pull on the trigger?
Act like a b*tch and try to bounce around like Tiger?
Or will you stand around and prove that you are bigger?
Know this won't get broke up, boy this ain't no Jerry Springer.
Bolded words are either added or changed.
Second has has no logical rhyming lol you go like 1,2,2,1,1,2,1. Which is weird =p
I can give some to the other two of you guys if you want
Last Edited: Thu Jan 24, 2013 18:27:23
Hate on me, but you can't deny skill
I crush all the momentum you guys build with my eyes sealed
I actually just noticed how I messed that up, damn. Who do you think won? And if you'd like to critique it go ahead first was sober, second I was soarin' aha
EarlNigma wins. Thanks fisheyes, you stepped up and let it rip even though I can tell this isn't something you do, that's awesome. Keep it up. I could tell you were rhyming just to make a rhyme sometimes though.
I loled hard at "You're a truck?" idk why. Good job fellas, I'll send you cash monies as soon as I can retrieve it from the vault (sometime today/early tomorrow prob)
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You're supposed to wait until you are on the bracket so you can battle someone;)
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I wanna rap.
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